Church: First United Methodist – Birmingham, Michigan
URL: http://www.fumcbirmingham.org/

Initial thoughts
Your home page is laid out very well. The menu on the left is a bit hard to read with the cross & flame behind it, but isn’t too bad. I know the UMC can be picky about how the cross and flame are used (though they aren’t known to complain about it), so I’d check and make sure it’s ok with them.
A few things that you’ve done especially well:
- Worship times are front and center
- Purpose is stated clearly
- The welcome message is easy to read (not big Christianese words)
- The welcome message is well-linked to appropriate areas of the site
A search box on the front would be nice, but it’s got an obvious link in the menu so it’s not a big deal.
Browsing around
One of the first links in your welcome message is for “Sunday morning worship”, so I went there. Aside from a weird formatting bug in FireFox (there is about 1″ of solid blue between the side menu and the content), it’s a great page. The stained glass doesn’t do much for me (maybe some people worshipping instead?), but you again did a great job of providing adequate content with appropriate links.
Since I’ve been a youth guy at times, I thought I’d check out the youth section. The first thing I noticed is that the “In God We Trust” is a generic image you got from elsewhere. Maybe MediaShout? I doubt many people will notice, but you still might be better off with a picture of your own kids up there.
The content on this page is a bit overwhelming. So many links, and I have no idea where to go next. In addition, some of the links are (surprise!) PDF files – no no. Having PDFs on the site is fine, but you should keep them clearly marked. A simple “(PDF)” after each file, or a PDF icon or something would be adequate.
The content on the subpages I looked at was pretty good, but could use a few more links. For example, on one page you suggest I “contact Heather McNutt…”. Why not link that to her page is the staff section so I can see her photo?
With that in mind, I headed over to the “Contact Us” page using the link at the top. This page suffers from the same spacing glitch as the worship page, but it has some good things going for it.
I like the bullets at the top – quick hits on how to get basic info. Visually, I would de-border things a bit. Lose the blue border on the photos, and maybe cut the border size on the table to just 1.
I found it odd that when I clicked on a person’s name I only got their photo and bio – what happened to their contact info? I would fully expect to have their phone number and e-mail on their individual pages, especially if you link directly to them like I suggested with the Heather McNutt example above.
Search engine optimization
There are a few things you can do to improve your SEO on the site. Doing these should drive a lot more traffic to your site, and they’re simple to do (though perhaps time-consuming).
First, you need to tweak your page titles. The worship page simply says “worship”. I’ll give you my standard page title suggestion:
Church Name – Church City, State – Page Name
So, your worship page would be:
First United Methodist Church – Birmingham, Michigan – Worship
You could change it to “First UMC” from time to time if you want, and “Michigan” could always become simply “MI”. Do this on every page of your site.
Next up are your page headers. You do a good job of putting a clear header on each page, but you format it poorly. Every page header is formatted by making it a font size=5, with various color and font options. Instead, wrap those headers in simple “H1″ tags and then mark up the H1 tag using CSS. You already have your H3 tags noted in your CSS file, so changing your H1s would be done in a similar way.
Finally, don’t abbreviate page names unless they’re really long. For example, Carl Gladstone’s page is “gldstn.htm”. That’s worthless in terms of SEO. Make it “gladstone.htm”, or even “deacon-carl-gladstone.htm”. If possible, point the old page to the new one using a 301 redirect. A 301 redirect will make sure that people linked to your old page automatically find the new one, and any PageRank from the old page will be passed on to the new one. However, since all of your pages are standard html (rather than PHP, ASP, etc), it’s a bit tricky. Here is a page with some information on how it can be done.
Conclusion
If I was looking for a church in your area and stumbled upon your site, I would be excited to visit. The church seems very active, which is a great thing.
Two suggestions left. First, finding the “home” button took a few seconds. Maybe put one on the top of your left-hand menu as well? I tried clicking on the graphic at the top too, which obviously didn’t work.
The final suggestion is a big one – create your own internal search engine. Using Google is a great temporary solution, but it’s got two major drawbacks:
- New pages don’t show up right away.
- You have no idea what people are typing in there.
By creating your own, it can instantly have every page listed, and you can keep track of what terms people are entering into it. This can be very valuable when you find that people are searching for “vacation bible school” and you don’t have anything posted for it yet! Here is a more comprehensive post about this.
Of course, to create your own search you’ll need to have a database-driven site which it doesn’t appear that you have. Given the massive size of your site, this really is the direction you should be going. It will be a huge project, but will make any changes much simpler in the future. Even if you don’t tackle it for a while, you should start looking into a bit.
Keep up the great work and feel free to leave your comments.