Church: First UMC – Swainsboro, GA
URL: http://www.swainsborofumc.org

Initial thoughts
As you might expect, my eyes were immediately drawn to the animated colored text at the top of the page. It seems like a bad move, for three reasons:
1 – If you’re gonna use Flash, at least get some photos of church members in there.
2 – If I want to get to your church, one way might be to copy-and-paste your address into Google Maps. I can’t copy and paste from a Flash animation.
3 – Search engines can’t read that text. If someone searches for “church on west main street in swainsboro” or “30401 church”, you won’t rank nearly as high as you should.
Some other comments on the front page:
- The menu looks good in Internet Explorer, but not so good in FireFox. The “Main Page” link drops down a line, which kicks the main text over to the right a bit.
- No links in the text. You talk about “strong history”, “variety of programs” and “global mission projects”, but don’t give me a link for more information about any of them.
- “We hope that we can assist you in having a closer walk with our Lord Jesus Christ.” I hope so too. If someone is new to your area and is coming from another church, they’ll agree. However, if someone is finally starting to maybe sorta think about going to a church, they will RUN from your site when they see text like that. Same goes for the mission statement. You can keep the mission statement on the site, but put it on an internal page instead.
- Get rid of the counter at the bottom of the page.
- I’m not sure where I stand on the “Developed by Dwight Watt” text. While I can see reasons for having it, it hurts the church site at least a bit. If nothing else, the site is leaking PageRank from there. Maybe just apply “rel=nofollow” to that link so the PageRank doesn’t go out with it.
Browsing around
So, lets try to get to the church. I don’t see a link for directions, so I assume I can get there from the “staff and contact info” page. Oops, broken link – “PAGE NOT FOUND”. Doing the drop-down link directly to the “contact” page gives me the address. I’m still on my own to find the church, but at least now I have the address in a format that I can copy and paste. If nothing else, at least include a link to your location on a mapping site, like this.
Now I want to read about your “global mission projects“. Since I can’t click to it from the front page, I’ll dig around. I guess maybe under “Groups and Activities”? Ahh yes, missions! Let’s see what we’ve got:
“First United Methodist Church is active in local, national and international missions. We have sent volunteer mission teams to local, national and international projects.” That’s it? Where were these projects? When were they? No photos all?
Down at the bottom I see that it was “revised August 10, 2003″. Ouch – four years. For “an active church in missions”, it’s pretty sad to only have two quick sentences that were posted nearly four years ago.
Since the site is fairly void of photos, I went to the “Links and Pictures” and then “Pictures” to find some more. At the bottom is some text that says “These pictures are reduced to speed display. Blah blah e-mail Dwight for the full-size”. Going into them, I see what he means. They’re tiny — they’re thumbnails. Why on earth can’t I click them for a larger version? They don’t have to be full-size, but at least give me a 600 pixel wide photo instead of just the thumbs. The pages will load just as quickly, but then those that choose to wait can get a larger one.
After that, I went to the “services” page. “Worship Services” seemed like a good link to follow.
Not much there. If I wanted to go to the 11:00 service, I see that it was a nursery and that’s about it. No more info, no links. Some questions I might have:
- What kind of service? Very traditional, blended, contemporary, something else?
- What ages can the nursery handle?
- What should I wear? Suit and tie, or can I come in a golf shirt and jeans?
- Sunday School appears to only be at 9:45, so does that mean that our four-year-old comes to the service with us?
There are plenty more questions that someone might have.
Search engine optimization
You rank first in Google right now for “swainsboro church”, which is great. How about some longer tail searches, though:
- “swainsboro worship” – #1
- “swainsboro sunday school” – #12
- “swainsboro youth group” – #51
- “swainsboro bible study” – not in the top 100
- “30401 church” – not in the top 100
- “Wayne DeFore” – not in the top 100
Some of those are quite surprising to me. Searching the name of a staff member should almost always bring the church site up near the top (unless it’s a very common name). Your church is nowhere to be found when I search for your Pastor, “Wayne DeFore”.
Some things that will help:
Change the flash at the top. As a general rule, don’t bury text in Flash. If you want to use Flash, give us smiling faces. Put the address down in the footer or something instead.
Remove or nofollow the link to “Dwight Watt” at the bottom. The site has precious little PageRank already, and that’s just leaking it out.
Move all of that CSS to an external file and bring it in with a “link” in your page head.
Link internally everywhere. In this case, you’re simply lacking a lot of pages. You should have a better page for your missions, then link to it from the front. You should have a detail page about Rev. DeFore, then link to it whenever you mention his name. Stuff like that.
Use H1 tags. Right now, you seem to use mostly H3 tags for the main header text on each page. Change those to H1, then style them however you want using CSS.
Good title tags. They keep the right info in them, but change appropriately on each page. Well done.
Conclusion
Aside from the SEO tips above, the following should also be done:
- Fix the broken “Staff and Contact Info” link in the menu.
- Add directions to the “Contact Us” page, or even create a separate “Directions” page.
- Add a few more photos throughout the site to spruce it up.
- Turn the small images in the “Pictures” section into true thumbnails and link them to the larger versions of each photo.
Any other suggestions for them or thoughts about what I’ve said? Leave them in the comments below.